D-Frag! ch. 09 [Mg]

Hello everyone. As a favour to edogawaconan, I proofread this manga (and may for more) as people have pointed out. There are still 7 (full) noticeable grammatical and 1.5 (half) structural changes I would make, but for minimal viewing, this suffices. Also, 7 out of the 20 pages is not bad (compared to the minimum one per page previously). I should also point out, this is my first time proofreading manga as I normally just edit anime. Thankfully though, Fidzerone’s English translation is much better than Zack’s anime translation (no offense to him). Anyway, enjoy.

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3 thoughts on “D-Frag! ch. 09 [Mg]

  1. The text has improved, well done!

    Well, “Just now, aren’t you drunk from it?” seems kind of weird. Maybe it’s “didn’t you just drink from that (bottle)”? And some missing punctuation, but hell, even Garfield comics have that. And some more (mostly smaller) grammar mistakes but you already said you’re aware of it all and I don’t want to make anyone angry. 😛

  2. Well, that line was purposely left as is on purpose. To fix it I would need to get in touch with the translator to understand what he meant as it can be interpreted two different ways, but I don’t have any way of doing that.

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